Commission - Fiona

Alrighty, to begin with <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />. I like the fact that you've given her the closest to what I had in mind, (IE the big and curvy look) compared to what everyone else has. There's been a few, but the best have her sitting, or lying down, and here, she actually looks like she has some meat on her bones, lol.

Now on the other hand, like I've said before, I know you're going through a block right now, and I appreciate that you really tried, but this looks a wee bit basic. Not that that's a really bad thing, just that it doesn't quite have the impact of some of your other pictures.

But! One thing you always do fairly well, is anatomy, and once again, it shows <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />. Her arms and her legs fit her body pretty well, and she's nice and realistically curvy looking without having the HUGE BOOBS + TINY WAIST thing that seems to be popular these days <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" />. And I really appreciate that, along with the her size <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />.

Now, her hands (or at least her wrists) seem to have shrank, in a contrast to the rest of her arms, but it's not very noticeable. Her hair (once again, something you've been having some problems with) also almost looks dreadlocked o.o (that look would actually look pretty damn cool on her <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />) .

All in all, it's not bad at all. I love the weight you gave her, something rare, too, and I love the way you try to match up a torso's anatomy with it's limbs. I also love the outfit you gave her, hehe, she could almost flash people...

Anyways, thank you very much!